tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post1967500201957790223..comments2024-03-13T12:29:29.462-07:00Comments on Aidan Writes: : Christmas CabinAidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-30943220840988470452010-12-29T15:15:59.468-08:002010-12-29T15:15:59.468-08:00wow. an evil dead Christmas. real tight writing.wow. an evil dead Christmas. real tight writing.Dream Terrainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05780523943251719025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-51556662934409896592010-12-27T06:49:49.613-08:002010-12-27T06:49:49.613-08:00Have people learned NOTHING from horror movies? If...Have people learned NOTHING from horror movies? If someone warns you - you stick to it! This is a good warning against not listening to your elders, and not being prepared!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-58925428289767563542010-12-26T20:55:22.399-08:002010-12-26T20:55:22.399-08:00Oh, very creepy. Always mind your elders, you migh...Oh, very creepy. Always mind your elders, you might live longer. Great job conveying that sense of doom with an economy of words! :)Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-82262778356154647562010-12-26T16:26:32.421-08:002010-12-26T16:26:32.421-08:00Creepy little story. He certainly should have list...Creepy little story. He certainly should have listened.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-3285090246693925022010-12-26T16:17:54.038-08:002010-12-26T16:17:54.038-08:00Why do people *NEVER* listen to creepy old men tha...Why do people *NEVER* listen to creepy old men that live in log cabins? *sigh* Youth today. He should have stayed inside. No good can come of this!<br /><br />Nice flash1Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-26275965787867191772010-12-26T14:27:09.637-08:002010-12-26T14:27:09.637-08:00This is Flash at its best. Every word counts and t...This is Flash at its best. Every word counts and the ending comes like Bruce Lee's one-inch punch. Excellent.Jason Cogginshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09509338964933754054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-13160038852843164792010-12-26T13:53:38.001-08:002010-12-26T13:53:38.001-08:00People should specify why one shouldn't go out...People should specify why one shouldn't go out after dark so at least the person who inevitability does it has fair warning. *shakes head* Nice, creepy Christmas story. I like that there is so much left to the reader's imagination.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-85232901351141101732010-12-25T20:21:37.208-08:002010-12-25T20:21:37.208-08:00Lights in the forest, there must be an explanation...Lights in the forest, there must be an explanation....love it. both the "slivers of light" around the door and the eeriness of the trees lit up painted a wonderful, creepy picture.eutychushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10358483532981233704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-49246911452236708962010-12-25T20:16:20.546-08:002010-12-25T20:16:20.546-08:00Lots of bad things can happen in a cabin in the wo...Lots of bad things can happen in a cabin in the woods. Bloody snow. You left us with that image. Glad I'm not home alone!Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-87410822869473153122010-12-24T20:23:37.999-08:002010-12-24T20:23:37.999-08:00Snow already tinged read, makes me wonder if there...Snow already tinged read, makes me wonder if there was another murder, or if it's the red of lighting that was going on out there. This might be my favorite of yours for how much it leaves the imagination, and how much it successfully makes me want to imagine.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-27515359492817204142010-12-24T17:59:24.398-08:002010-12-24T17:59:24.398-08:00Love the implication in this one, the idea that yo...Love the implication in this one, the idea that you know something's out there but you don't entirely know what it <i>is</i>. Carnivorous trees? Eldritch Xmas entity? Either way, it's bad and I'm glad I live in Florida -- warm, warm Florida.Loren Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-86732148692334746092010-12-24T16:41:15.241-08:002010-12-24T16:41:15.241-08:00@Donna, glad the tension worked for you.
@Steve G...@Donna, glad the tension worked for you.<br /><br />@Steve Green, you'll live long! God Jul!<br /><br />@Nevets, I remember we came up with similar stories but had to look through the flashy fiction archive to find the story. I was surprised at how similar the title and specific parts of the story were. Creepy... in a good way.<br /><br />@Michelle, isn't Christmas better in a cabin (of course, after readying, your piece, Nevets and mine I'm not sure I still want to spend that time in the cabin.)<br /><br />@Phil, thanks, Darwin works in mysterious ways.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-87720674167089606662010-12-24T16:38:16.423-08:002010-12-24T16:38:16.423-08:00Now I'm scared. Huge pine outside my house. Lo...Now I'm scared. Huge pine outside my house. Lookin' at me funny.S.D. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11587104303593306093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-42150669135471068982010-12-24T12:43:50.965-08:002010-12-24T12:43:50.965-08:00Ooo, good work. This is another tale of those who ...Ooo, good work. This is another tale of those who can't live and learnPhil Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261840720705703731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-65197891513967307732010-12-24T12:12:59.052-08:002010-12-24T12:12:59.052-08:00Ah, serves him right for not listening! I loved th...Ah, serves him right for not listening! I loved that Nevets' piece was in a cabin, and I imagined mine in a cabin, and now yours. Nice. :)Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-36130540589610215852010-12-24T11:38:57.017-08:002010-12-24T11:38:57.017-08:00Pleasantly brutal.
So you remember that time that...Pleasantly brutal.<br /><br />So you remember that time that there was Christmas picture as a Flashy Fiction prompt and you and I both wrote about a dragon attack?<br /><br />Yeah, my Advent Ghost story takes place at a cabin.C. N. Nevetshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00375714948653196993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-71855302716313661372010-12-24T10:17:00.334-08:002010-12-24T10:17:00.334-08:00The reason the old man lived there so long, is bec...The reason the old man lived there so long, is because he knows better than to go outside after dark, I don't know what's in them there woods, but I'll bet my last penny that it isn't good news.<br /><br />Happy Christmas Aidan.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-7671888656939948072010-12-24T10:02:49.891-08:002010-12-24T10:02:49.891-08:00Always heed an old man's warning :)
That was ...Always heed an old man's warning :)<br /><br />That was creepy; intense. Kept me on the edge of my seat looking for more.<br /><br />....dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.com