tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post2018284568698400509..comments2024-03-13T12:29:29.462-07:00Comments on Aidan Writes: : Visby's Brazen LadyAidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-89895156023346929782010-11-25T09:01:07.369-08:002010-11-25T09:01:07.369-08:00I was a bit confused as well. The children didn...I was a bit confused as well. The children didn't seem to have anything to do with the ending. Why was the woman giving out apples? <br /><br />Atmospheric though. Death seemed to come peacefully.Tessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08377570668333453073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-5643558172751633882010-11-21T21:00:14.426-08:002010-11-21T21:00:14.426-08:00@John, Thanks for the welcome and the comment. Se...@John, Thanks for the welcome and the comment. Seeing as my body thinks its 6am-ish (it should be adjusted a little) but the clock says 9pm, I think I'll wait until tomorrow to try to clear that up.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-11346014972896672862010-11-21T20:21:01.312-08:002010-11-21T20:21:01.312-08:00Welcome home, Aidan.
I'm confused about what&...Welcome home, Aidan.<br /><br />I'm confused about what's supposed to be going on with the children in this one. Read it twice - unsure why they walk drunkenly, why they disseminate and where they're going to. Maybe another go-over would clear it up, when you're less jetlagged and world-weary?John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com