tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post2103199288269801466..comments2024-03-13T12:29:29.462-07:00Comments on Aidan Writes: : Memories of Cheong Fun (Steamed Rice Noodles)AidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-79485625452742427562011-08-09T07:16:59.765-07:002011-08-09T07:16:59.765-07:00Lovely little piece of otherworldliness, Aidan. =)...Lovely little piece of otherworldliness, Aidan. =)<br /><br />I've a little something for you over on <a href="http://willwriteflashfictionforfood.blogspot.com/2011/08/blog-awards.html" rel="nofollow">my <i>other</i> blog</a>, the one for when I'm not writing flash fiction. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-9671910392509126702011-08-04T08:33:37.387-07:002011-08-04T08:33:37.387-07:00Hi there Aidan -- I really liked that line about B...Hi there Aidan -- I really liked that line about Buddha's skull being open to the sky, and Jia placing the coins like butterflies. Plenty to get your teeth into here, despite this most modest of servings. Must be the magic. <br /><br />St.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10111660663883108862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-11560021084748665702011-08-02T17:38:42.073-07:002011-08-02T17:38:42.073-07:00@Kwee, thanks. I like the idea of the fragile.
@I...@Kwee, thanks. I like the idea of the fragile.<br /><br />@Icy, I've been working on short stories. I feel I muddy things as I work on that longer length but they are improving.<br /><br />@PC, Thanks. I've been having fun seeing what I can conjure.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-51161830843865665112011-08-02T06:03:58.408-07:002011-08-02T06:03:58.408-07:00A detailed picture painted with a few words.A detailed picture painted with a few words.Cilla Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05863635649633357363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-75934797835257578982011-08-01T12:40:34.730-07:002011-08-01T12:40:34.730-07:00You always build such expansive words in such shor...You always build such expansive words in such short pieces - I'd love to see what you did with an extended piece.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-84708486296040074572011-08-01T04:35:36.122-07:002011-08-01T04:35:36.122-07:00I am so intrigued by your writing. This is very e...I am so intrigued by your writing. This is very elegant yet so fragile. Very nice, good magic.Kwee Cats and Arthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16650228469037436925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-16109903011003700372011-07-29T20:25:33.069-07:002011-07-29T20:25:33.069-07:00@Sonia, You got it right ;)
@Steve, I'm not s...@Sonia, You got it right ;)<br /><br />@Steve, I'm not sure I would trust everything Jia says, but she would view it as you say.<br /><br />@Rebecca, Thanks, I wanted to capture her viewpoint and that was what helped bring out the beauty in that paragraph.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-74605081369030177642011-07-29T16:51:13.734-07:002011-07-29T16:51:13.734-07:00I must compliment you on that second paragraph. Go...I must compliment you on that second paragraph. Gorgeous imagery, pure magic in that.<br /><br />Overall, this had a flow and rhythm that somehow matched perfectly the story. Much enjoyed.R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-48519433480428047232011-07-29T15:15:13.190-07:002011-07-29T15:15:13.190-07:00A very eloquent mugging. Maybe she could feel that...A very eloquent mugging. Maybe she could feel that their need of the coins was greater than hers.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-83066777550858572722011-07-29T15:00:36.808-07:002011-07-29T15:00:36.808-07:00Nice story. I would have used magic on the boys. B...Nice story. I would have used magic on the boys. But maybe she did, huh?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com