tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post306996591847717221..comments2024-03-13T12:29:29.462-07:00Comments on Aidan Writes: : Merph's FogAidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-59252111913905641472010-09-21T08:10:48.005-07:002010-09-21T08:10:48.005-07:00Cool story! As others have said, it's a neat w...Cool story! As others have said, it's a neat world you've created.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-15957366980699914642010-09-20T15:13:26.298-07:002010-09-20T15:13:26.298-07:00Icy, Laura, you're giving me some evil ideas f...Icy, Laura, you're giving me some evil ideas for future scenes.<br /><br />Stephen, GP, there is more here working to get out. However, I should improve the closing of these teasers. Thanks, for the comments.<br /><br />Ganymeder, glad you are enjoying the world.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-22487489155097498242010-09-20T13:12:40.835-07:002010-09-20T13:12:40.835-07:00I really like this world you've created.I really like this world you've created.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-88498004838936903862010-09-20T11:16:57.536-07:002010-09-20T11:16:57.536-07:00This felt like it could be a longer work to me als...This felt like it could be a longer work to me also. I liked the idea of the magical powder.Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-86659524225464642212010-09-20T09:37:14.791-07:002010-09-20T09:37:14.791-07:00I enjoyed this return to the world of Whitey and M...I enjoyed this return to the world of Whitey and Merph... but it feels incomplete, like the end of the story here is yet to be told...Stephen Watkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07706597991293794033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-40071002847433741872010-09-20T06:10:15.868-07:002010-09-20T06:10:15.868-07:00I'm with Icy...worried about Whitey! :)I'm with Icy...worried about Whitey! :)Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-32684967704777814742010-09-19T14:03:11.207-07:002010-09-19T14:03:11.207-07:00I was worried something might happen to the dog bu...I was worried something might happen to the dog but I'm glad they both got away in the end.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-73933020916503119852010-09-18T18:20:56.925-07:002010-09-18T18:20:56.925-07:00@vandamir, Thanks. I'd meant to tag this with...@vandamir, Thanks. I'd meant to tag this with Merph. I have one other flash written with Merph and his powders <a href="http://aidanwrites.blogspot.com/2010/07/merph-and-whitey.html" rel="nofollow">here</a>.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-51120213056400518182010-09-17T23:18:23.044-07:002010-09-17T23:18:23.044-07:00Interesting story and world. I hope you write more...Interesting story and world. I hope you write more about it. I want to see not only the limits but the powers of these powders.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-79644002213660624542010-09-17T19:59:38.162-07:002010-09-17T19:59:38.162-07:00@Gracie, thanks. I like the idea of them vacation...@Gracie, thanks. I like the idea of them vacationing someplace south. I'm sure Merph will find something to grumble about when he gets there.<br /><br />@John, thanks. I still need to work on the limitations of Merph's powders, but this is a world I find intriguing.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-53755347704603022482010-09-17T10:40:21.965-07:002010-09-17T10:40:21.965-07:00I like the idea of covert magic here.I like the idea of covert magic here.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-36221610779565584372010-09-17T09:30:07.159-07:002010-09-17T09:30:07.159-07:00Nice magical spy story. Covert magic! I like it. M...Nice magical spy story. Covert magic! I like it. Merph needs to take Whitey and retire someplace sunny now.<br /><br />Enjoyed this story!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04548995059233308982noreply@blogger.com