tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post3955622471865344265..comments2024-03-13T12:29:29.462-07:00Comments on Aidan Writes: : Valhalla WayAidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-55637690434564398072010-05-28T20:52:07.585-07:002010-05-28T20:52:07.585-07:00Ganymeder, thank-you for the correction & comm...Ganymeder, thank-you for the correction & comments. I think it's the Swede in me trying to infect my English w/ Swedish grammar.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-48158425280593726852010-05-28T20:35:46.350-07:002010-05-28T20:35:46.350-07:00Oh, it's unnerving enough walking at night in ...Oh, it's unnerving enough walking at night in an unknown area, but add in an unknown country as well as its really scary! I really felt for the character.<br /><br />One small correction (hope you don't mind), but you should capitalize 'american'...American. <br /><br />Loved the story.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.com