tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post5285853709871395278..comments2024-03-13T12:29:29.462-07:00Comments on Aidan Writes: : The Flower EatersAidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-24858223330835115352023-09-29T03:00:19.633-07:002023-09-29T03:00:19.633-07:00It highlighting the intricate connections within e...It highlighting the intricate connections within ecosystems. <a href="https://theiconictimes.com/best-gaming-websites/" rel="nofollow">Best Website Gaming</a> This evocative phrase prompts reflection on the delicate balance between flora and fauna. VPNGAMNGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18392618934254147038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-21799159640058733672011-02-07T13:01:51.573-08:002011-02-07T13:01:51.573-08:00As already pointed out... Creepy.As already pointed out... Creepy.Stephen Watkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07706597991293794033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-28011773250043825192011-02-06T23:02:48.976-08:002011-02-06T23:02:48.976-08:00@Mari, thanks for the feedback. It's always g...@Mari, thanks for the feedback. It's always good to know what is working/not working for people.<br /><br />@GK, Glad you enjoyed this shocking experience.<br /><br />@Magaly, I find emotions can be difficult for me to sometimes get across; it's good to know that I succeeded in this instance.<br /><br />@Seleste, I really should have linked <a href="http://www.environmentalgraffiti.com/featured/evil-fairies-massacre-insects/19642" rel="nofollow">this art installation</a> which matches with my view of The Others.<br /><br />@Ganymeder, LOL. I was more thinking of the thin milk that you find on the stem when you pinch it in half.<br /><br />@Tim, thanks!AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-23810190316581349352011-02-06T15:09:51.760-08:002011-02-06T15:09:51.760-08:00Nightmarish and creepy good.Nightmarish and creepy good.~Timhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06774944172261988587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-32749913871445294402011-02-06T14:18:05.226-08:002011-02-06T14:18:05.226-08:00But how can you milk dandelions when they have suc...But how can you milk dandelions when they have such tiny udders? Lol No, really creepy piece - especially with so few words.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-32929823281370135202011-02-06T14:07:37.059-08:002011-02-06T14:07:37.059-08:00Even though I didn't understand what was going...Even though I didn't understand what was going on until the end, I really enjoyed this piece. The imagery hit me more on second read than on first (since I knew more of what to picture then LOL). <br /><br />Poor kitty though :(Seleste deLaney/Julie Partickahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05346934576672398786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-57486393950507172472011-02-06T13:13:35.797-08:002011-02-06T13:13:35.797-08:00Poor Billy ;-( It was nice to see things through h...Poor Billy ;-( It was nice to see things through his eyes; it was painful too. I'm a sucker for writing that provokes emotions.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-62943037803848080392011-02-06T12:48:57.853-08:002011-02-06T12:48:57.853-08:00My eyes actually widened. It takes a lot for me to...My eyes actually widened. It takes a lot for me to do that. I have tiny eyes and I'm rarely shocked by horror, but wow!G.K. Terencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06880063258789164471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-79984716767835695952011-02-06T09:51:40.694-08:002011-02-06T09:51:40.694-08:00Interesting tale, but I confess I had a bit of a h...Interesting tale, but I confess I had a bit of a hard time to understand it. I had no trouble at all to grasp the meaning of the end, tho. O.oMarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303695124956391293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-27634306453573718072011-02-05T10:31:58.895-08:002011-02-05T10:31:58.895-08:00@John, absolutely. He better do that before it get...@John, absolutely. He better do that before it gets around that he's a kattaphile.<br /><br />@Steve, glad you like the others; they are certainly harder to weed.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-57672077651796658772011-02-05T07:35:33.140-08:002011-02-05T07:35:33.140-08:00Oh, I like the sound of these "Others"
...Oh, I like the sound of these "Others"<br /><br />Small nasty things can be far more scary than big nasty things.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-49449993759256615382011-02-04T19:53:42.692-08:002011-02-04T19:53:42.692-08:00I guess the rest of that town just hated cats. Poo...I guess the rest of that town just hated cats. Poor Billy should move. Quite gruesome.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-46278092626517758762011-02-04T11:36:21.623-08:002011-02-04T11:36:21.623-08:00@Lara, I ended up with her emotion but not the ent...@Lara, I ended up with her emotion but not the entire reason around it as I was working on narrowing this down to fit drabble size (100 words). The line had originally read: "Her voice drops to the fighting tones she uses when she fights with dad." Hope that doesn't ruin it by exposing the mystery.<br /><br />@John, excellent; I wanted to achieve nightmare.<br /><br />@Eric, thanks!AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-19079154778893207992011-02-04T10:36:34.853-08:002011-02-04T10:36:34.853-08:00Cool story! Makes me wonder what's going on wi...Cool story! Makes me wonder what's going on with the mom.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-13146606162377758302011-02-04T10:26:56.840-08:002011-02-04T10:26:56.840-08:00Nightmarish...
"...he remembers the twisted ...Nightmarish...<br /><br />"...he remembers the twisted shapes milking the dandelions. Sap stains their chins in the <br />moonlight..."<br /><br />Love that bit. It has a wonderful grotesquery to it.<br /><br />The whole piece is like a shadow of innocence twisted by flickering candlelight.John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-53683667802871085732011-02-04T10:05:53.749-08:002011-02-04T10:05:53.749-08:00Whoa, this is freaky. I want to know more about th...Whoa, this is freaky. I want to know more about the mom and this kitten. Just what is going on and what is making her so unhappy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com