tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post6134728127302874720..comments2024-03-13T12:29:29.462-07:00Comments on Aidan Writes: : 51st PresidentAidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-18527634668042676752010-10-01T09:01:19.702-07:002010-10-01T09:01:19.702-07:00@John, @Stephen: Thank-you for the feedback. I ap...@John, @Stephen: Thank-you for the feedback. I appreciate it because it helps me improve to understand what works _and_ what doesn't work.<br /><br />Glad you both were amused by President Cookie Monster.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-44356488773721191582010-10-01T08:47:57.485-07:002010-10-01T08:47:57.485-07:00Agree with John. I was a bit confused as to who w...Agree with John. I was a bit confused as to who was who during the first part.<br /><br />A peculiar one, this. Amusing.Stephen Watkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07706597991293794033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-65295752057487865172010-09-30T14:10:48.279-07:002010-09-30T14:10:48.279-07:00If you're looking for feedback, the lack of br...If you're looking for feedback, the lack of breaks for dialogue and action in the first paragraph are very awkward, especially since the sentiments veer around so much - from Cookie Monster references to glaring in just three words. On the flipside, President Cookie Monster is very funny.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-71292234109322361752010-09-30T13:19:43.241-07:002010-09-30T13:19:43.241-07:00I think he took the moderate votes from both parti...I think he took the moderate votes from both parties :)AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-41317945663522198852010-09-30T09:35:32.791-07:002010-09-30T09:35:32.791-07:00Now what I'm wondering is who voted for the co...Now what I'm wondering is who voted for the cookie monster! lolTessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08377570668333453073noreply@blogger.com