tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post9214814882954841760..comments2024-03-13T12:29:29.462-07:00Comments on Aidan Writes: : Story ForgeAidanFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-47033073796571409562011-08-17T04:37:02.711-07:002011-08-17T04:37:02.711-07:00Hi there Aidan -- you covered a lot of ground flic...Hi there Aidan -- you covered a lot of ground flicking between moments, creating a very enthralling tale. Loved the piece on the glacier, and the mythological feel in parts. Nice characters, too. St.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10111660663883108862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-82110370124521216542011-08-14T18:41:43.475-07:002011-08-14T18:41:43.475-07:00Cruel world, a world only the power of stories can...Cruel world, a world only the power of stories can heal. I'd like to see more of this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-79053040861170677542011-08-13T15:35:24.163-07:002011-08-13T15:35:24.163-07:00I love the idea of a forge where stories are made....I love the idea of a forge where stories are made. Isn't that how we hear them, as voices on the wind?Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-67389946815470089582011-08-13T13:45:02.764-07:002011-08-13T13:45:02.764-07:00Love some of the imagery here - and liked the conc...Love some of the imagery here - and liked the concept of the story-forge. This could definitely be a bigger story.Cilla Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05863635649633357363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-25964937480789227012011-08-13T05:34:33.228-07:002011-08-13T05:34:33.228-07:00A harsh world this one Aidan, taking over from the...A harsh world this one Aidan, taking over from the old man will not be an easy task.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-74598331431846821522011-08-12T19:48:27.232-07:002011-08-12T19:48:27.232-07:00@John, I think there is work for a whole chain of ...@John, I think there is work for a whole chain of mentors.<br /><br />@Sonia, Thanks. That is one of the challenges with first person. It probably didn't help that I anglicized the icelandic names making it difficult to guess sex from the name as well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-7651280143258549802011-08-12T17:31:25.662-07:002011-08-12T17:31:25.662-07:00Really liked this. This line (I'd lost my husb...Really liked this. This line (I'd lost my husband and firstborn . . .)was when the realized MC was a woman. LOL But that sounds like a painful way to go.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4879556472347736809.post-47761346148684546422011-08-12T09:36:55.713-07:002011-08-12T09:36:55.713-07:00Yeah, now you had work for two. Quite the dramatic...Yeah, now you had work for two. Quite the dramatic exit!John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com